Written a SCREENPLAY? Get a detailed ANALYSIS before sending it out. in Las Vegas, Nevada For Sale
You've written a screenplay but wonder if it's any good. Your friends aren't much help as they like everything you've ever written and your cat likes it (as a scratch toy). You'd like to get some detailed feedback on your script but don't know where to turn. That's where I come in.
I've sold five screenplays and I offer an in-depth scene-by-scene analysis of your screenplay. I give you an overall analysis then I lead you through each scene to find what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved.
For the past couple years I've been writing and rewriting feature-length screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays to date and I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: I did an extremely detailed analysis of a script for a writer and they won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. I spent an hour and a half on their first page alone to help smooth out the kinks. I also analyzed a script for a writer then helped them rewrite the dialogue and they recently acquired one million dollars toward making their film. I did an analysis for a director and helped rewrite the screenplay and that script was recently shot and is in post. And finally, I performed an analysis for a writer who has written movies that have made in the 100s of millions of dollars. He was a comedy writer struggling with the plotting of a hard-boiled thriller and I set him on the right track.
I charge $250.00 for an extremely comprehensive script analysis. I accept PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
Why have a person who has never written a screenplay before review your script? On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/SampleAnalysis01.pdf
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/SampleAnalysis02.pdf
SAMPLES OF MY SCREENWRITING:
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/HeroOpeningScene.pdf
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/GHBirthdayScene.pdf
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/TEOTOpening.pdf
REFERENCES AND RESUME:
http://homepage.mac.com/lambent/Testimonial-Resume.pdf
MY INTERNET MOVIE DATABASE (IMDB) PAGE:
http://www.imdb.com/name/nmxxxx241/
FORMAT: I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Let me help guide you to improve your screenplay.
Dan Wilson