Get Your SCREENPLAY Analyzed by a Professional! in Las Vegas, Nevada For Sale

Hello Screenwriters!
I've analyzed over 3,000 screenplays and have seen all the mistakes writers make. I'll find the problems in your script and even rewrite a few lines of dialogue and description to show how I would do it (see samples below).
MY SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: One writer won first prize and $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Screenplay Competition. A second writer acquired one million dollars in funding for their film after my analysis. Another writer shot his movie recently after making extensive changes to his script. And finally I helped out a writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions at the box office.
BELOW PLEASE FIND TWO SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE YOU CAN VIEW ONLINE OR DOWNLOAD AND REVIEW AT YOUR LEISURE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
I charge $250.00 for a comprehensive analysis and take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan